Jane's comments on my Dissertation Proposal:
This is an interesting topic, Katerina, but at present you have too many chapters and are trying to do too much. You give an outline of a number of huge topics -the Romantic's development of an ecological view; the Victorians's industrialisation, colonization, capitalization and mechanization. You could only deal with these in the most general way. Some reference to these topics is certainly essential as the background to your argument, but what you need to do is focus on News from Nowhere and its relation to Morris's ecological views and specific Romantic influences.
Suggested books:
The pastoral vision of William Morris: 'The earthly paradise by Blue Calhoun
Our plan:
1 Make an alternative outline plan.
I need to see where the focus will be on. On Ruskin or
Keats, most have talked about Morris's influence by R.
but less about the Morris-Keats connection. Look into Morris's letters for references about Keats or the other
Romantics. Make a clear distinction as to which is the
greatest impact on Morris. What does my research has to
offer. Think, what I new am I saying through my diss.
what do I add to it all.
5000words.
Use Chapter 7 as the beginning of the dissertation.
Continue with chapter 7 and create a more detailed account
of the link between Nowhere and Keats' poems.
Use Chapter 4 and expand it, explain Morris's interest in
Nature. Which are Morris's influences.
Do some parallel reading of Keats and Morris and see
where are the similarities, compare and contrast)
3 Expand Chapter 5, Read more about the Ecology in
Nowhere
To summarize:
By 15th of July
I write and email the new diss outline, the 1st chapter and an expansion of the chapter 3, Ecology in Nowhere.
Keep in touch with her and ask for any questions I might have during this time.
By the 5th of August I will send to Jane my new extract on Garden in Nowhere.